Dmman33's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[suitcase]

NICE!

Real great comic timing. It was like watching an old Looney Tunes Short. Wasn't too keen on the music, though. Otherwise, awesome.

[Dont Mess Wth Ninjas]

You were doing great until the end...

I loved the animation style here. It would have been much better had the blood effects been the same quality as the figures...

[The Stupidest Video Ever]

Well, it's exactly what it says on the tin...

You certainly made a stupid video here. I thought there were some funny jokes, though. Mainly the Window bit and the WoW thing.

[The Life Cycle of Flash]

Great idea with a lot of heart, but needs work...

I love the emotion here. Your problems are only technical. I don't mind the lack of a preloader, but you could have timed the music better and had a replay button at the end.

If I were you, I'd fix these problems and reupload this. I think it would resonate.

[The Revolutionary War]

As a history buff, this made me cry...

Dude, seriously, you couldn't be bothered to do more research with this? Really? With info so readily available... Had you made real historical jokes, this could have actually been pretty funny, but you just tread over dull nationalist stereotypes. I'm sorry, I just have a real fascination with this turbulent period of history, so inaccuracies and simplification on THIS scale really get my goat.

I will say, though, that the lip-synching was not bad, though your UK accent needs work. But if you EVER do a historical piece, you MUST have done at least basic research, rather than just skimmed a textbook. There is so much comedy in History, but if you actually search it out, anything based on it will turn out infinitely better than something just skimmed from memory of history classes.

Oh well...at least you considered doing a historical piece rather than tired video game and anime stuff. Now you just have to get the history right ;)

JazzoTheGreat responds:

OK, OK, I get it.